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Story writing is something i took up as a pastime. I had taken a shot at this before several times, giving up each time without having written much. Here is one more attempt at it.This ones titled "Bliss", while listening to song "Heaven" by Bryan Adams, i thought what would be my idea of bliss. :-)
She’s lying on the bed, wide awake but eyes closed, pretending that she’s deep asleep and trying not to smile. He’s standing leaning at the door, arms crossed, smiling at her. He knows she’s awake. Its 7 in the morning, the first rays of rising sun streaming through the half open window is falling on her face making her glow like an angel. Looking at her trying not to smile, makes him smile more.
A cool breeze flowing in from the window gently blows a strand of her beautiful hair onto her face. She doesn't want to move it, she doesn't want him to know she’s awake.
He is still smiling, soaking in this sight of his angel lying there pretending to be asleep and not knowing he is there. he wants this moment to last forever.
He slowly moves toward the bed. She can hear him coming but still does not want to open her eyes. She is enjoying this game of hers and he can see it.
He eases himself onto the bed next to her, close enough to smell the beautiful fragrance of her hair and gently moves the strand of hair away from her face. Wishing again if time could just stop, and this moment here could last forever
Watching her play this game of hers, still pretending hard at being asleep, he slowly leans in closer to her ears. She can feel his warm breath on her neck, making her smile more. But she still refuses to open her eyes.
Still smiling, he whispers into her ears "I Love You", and she opens her eyes finally smiling :)
3 comments:
Nice:)... Enjoyed reading it..Continue writing:)
Glad you liked it:)...Definitely will try my best :)
Now i know who the original Mills and Boones author is .. :D
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